Jackson Rathbone's Travel Hazards
By Jackson Rathbone
Photographed by Jackson Rathbone
The actor Jackson Rathbone stars in The Twilight Saga: Breaking Dawn-Part 1, in theaters now, and the web series, Aim High, which he co-produced with McG. Next year, he will head back out on tour with his band, 100 Monkeys. Here, her writes about how her got that black eye as part of our Winter Issue's Travel Tales feature
We'll be posting more travel pieces by everyone from Momofuku pastry chef Christina Tosi to Lady Gaga stylist Nicola Formichetti. You can read about Sasha Grey's trip to Thailand and Germany here.
It was the spring of 2010 and I was in love. The girl who had stolen my heart was a black 2006 custom Gibson Les Paul. We had met in the City of Angels on my 25th birthday. She wanted to come home with me, and I could tell this would be more than a one-night stand. This was love -- not my first -- but the last in a long line of broken strings and humbuckers. Our love was electric. She sang to me, and I knew her name was Betty.
I had been on the road with my band, 100 Monkeys, playing shows across North America. On this leg of the tour, we were playing dive bars and juke joints, caravanning with a small trailer lugged by an old Ford van, followed by a small white Scion xB. It wasn't luxurious by any means, but we were able to connect with our fans on a personal level.
The end of the tour brought 100 Monkeys back to our home state of California, to San Francisco specifically. We had one day off to explore the city, but we spent it in a dingy rehearsal space near the main piers on the industrial side of town. We were writing new songs for our return to Los Angeles in preparation for our future album, Liquid Zoo. After all, music was why we were there, and we had already driven by the famous Haight-Ashbury, now home to a Gap. We preferred to keep playing as opposed to sightseeing.
After rehearsal, we began unloading in a rather disorderly fashion -- joking, sipping beers and passing back instruments and gear, which we lined up along a dimly-lit, one-way alley. I was humming the still half-written lyrics for our future song "Prayer," while directing our tour manager as he backed the van-trailer through the narrow street. Though I was on "night watch" duty, I (admittedly) lost focus of our precious instruments and gear. I would soon learn to never ever make that mistake again. My beloved Betty was gone.
I was in a panic, my senses fully alert. I could taste the salty San Franciscan air, polluted with sticky-sweet carbon dioxide, and my own fear. I could smell the bay, miles away, lapping against the shoreline like an excited Jack Russell terrier. Then, from the corner of my eye, I saw a shadow. I turned: "Hey!" A singular exclamation that meant: "You son of a bitch! That's my guitar! Get your ass back here before I cut off your sticky fingers and shove them so deeply into every known orifice that your parents will reel back and choose to never consummate that moment of lust years ago when you were merely a swimming little spunk in your father's left testicle!"
The shadowy figure started running, and so did I.
There are moments you will always remember, and then there are moments when you awaken flying through the air in a fury of righteous anger and indignation, where physical bodies impact much like comets in the cosmos, exploding upon impact, each chipping away at the other and wrestling over a freshly painted guitar case containing a sleeping object of ebony, mahogany and my bleeding, beating heart. I tackled the shadow and it swung back, wild with elbows and fists. My hands bit into concrete to cushion my fall. I held onto the guitar case amidst the writhing and the swinging limbs, as blood began to flow from my temple. Suddenly, the shadow was gone. I began to breathe again. I was alone with my love in my arms.
We'll be posting more travel pieces by everyone from Momofuku pastry chef Christina Tosi to Lady Gaga stylist Nicola Formichetti. You can read about Sasha Grey's trip to Thailand and Germany here.
It was the spring of 2010 and I was in love. The girl who had stolen my heart was a black 2006 custom Gibson Les Paul. We had met in the City of Angels on my 25th birthday. She wanted to come home with me, and I could tell this would be more than a one-night stand. This was love -- not my first -- but the last in a long line of broken strings and humbuckers. Our love was electric. She sang to me, and I knew her name was Betty.
I had been on the road with my band, 100 Monkeys, playing shows across North America. On this leg of the tour, we were playing dive bars and juke joints, caravanning with a small trailer lugged by an old Ford van, followed by a small white Scion xB. It wasn't luxurious by any means, but we were able to connect with our fans on a personal level.
The end of the tour brought 100 Monkeys back to our home state of California, to San Francisco specifically. We had one day off to explore the city, but we spent it in a dingy rehearsal space near the main piers on the industrial side of town. We were writing new songs for our return to Los Angeles in preparation for our future album, Liquid Zoo. After all, music was why we were there, and we had already driven by the famous Haight-Ashbury, now home to a Gap. We preferred to keep playing as opposed to sightseeing.
After rehearsal, we began unloading in a rather disorderly fashion -- joking, sipping beers and passing back instruments and gear, which we lined up along a dimly-lit, one-way alley. I was humming the still half-written lyrics for our future song "Prayer," while directing our tour manager as he backed the van-trailer through the narrow street. Though I was on "night watch" duty, I (admittedly) lost focus of our precious instruments and gear. I would soon learn to never ever make that mistake again. My beloved Betty was gone.
I was in a panic, my senses fully alert. I could taste the salty San Franciscan air, polluted with sticky-sweet carbon dioxide, and my own fear. I could smell the bay, miles away, lapping against the shoreline like an excited Jack Russell terrier. Then, from the corner of my eye, I saw a shadow. I turned: "Hey!" A singular exclamation that meant: "You son of a bitch! That's my guitar! Get your ass back here before I cut off your sticky fingers and shove them so deeply into every known orifice that your parents will reel back and choose to never consummate that moment of lust years ago when you were merely a swimming little spunk in your father's left testicle!"
The shadowy figure started running, and so did I.
There are moments you will always remember, and then there are moments when you awaken flying through the air in a fury of righteous anger and indignation, where physical bodies impact much like comets in the cosmos, exploding upon impact, each chipping away at the other and wrestling over a freshly painted guitar case containing a sleeping object of ebony, mahogany and my bleeding, beating heart. I tackled the shadow and it swung back, wild with elbows and fists. My hands bit into concrete to cushion my fall. I held onto the guitar case amidst the writhing and the swinging limbs, as blood began to flow from my temple. Suddenly, the shadow was gone. I began to breathe again. I was alone with my love in my arms.
Your Comment
Posted at 4:03 on Dec 16, 2011
Jackson, this is so well written and exciting to read. No doubt this story telling talent serves you well with song writing. I’m glad this love story had a happy ending.
Posted at 4:07 on Dec 16, 2011
He is not only such a talented musician, actor and photographer, but a talented writer as well. This, I have known from reading his poetry years ago, but it's something I am pleased to re-realize once again.
I knew the story of the black eye, but I never knew it told like this... So eloquent and reverent.
Posted at 4:09 on Dec 16, 2011
I love him cause he's the most authentic of 'em all.
Posted at 7:46 on Dec 16, 2011
Very good story I was sitting on the edge So glad you got your Betty back. You should make a movie out of it. It is said that Ron Howard only needs a picture, you are far more original @ hip than him. I will be waiting for the movie to come out!
Posted at 4:08 on Dec 17, 2011
I wanna read more!
Posted at 7:20 on Dec 17, 2011
I love happy endings!
Posted at 10:31 on Dec 17, 2011
Nice, I knew that you could write. Keep it up! Seeing the picture was a little upsetting, but the things we do for the ones we love is always a dangerous proposition. One must watch out for all the things on a tour! Love the writings keep acting and singing!!
Posted at 10:59 on Dec 17, 2011
he still looks great
Posted at 1:49 on Dec 18, 2011
aww hes so cute i love him =]
Posted at 11:48 on Dec 18, 2011
Maybe a new career on writing? Very captivating....
Posted at 4:24 on Dec 19, 2011
awwhhhh, jacksoonn!!!!
at least you got betty back!
:)
Posted at 10:15 on Dec 19, 2011
Beautiful.
Posted at 9:15 on Dec 20, 2011
That was sexy!
Posted at 3:34 on Dec 21, 2011
Doesn't really hit me as much of a travel piece. Kinda self-indulgent tripe, really. And I would know. I pump it out all the time :D
P.S. That Gap got kicked out years ago. Good riddance, but I mean, how many smoke shops does one street need before it begins to get a bit redundant?
Posted at 12:00 on Dec 22, 2011
He looks hot beat up lol
Posted at 10:43 on Dec 22, 2011
YOU ARE A AHELL OF A GOOD WRITTER AND IM GLAD YOU GOT BACK YOUR LOVE MAN! LOVE LOVE AND RESPECT ;)
Posted at 10:43 on Dec 22, 2011
Wonderfully written -- not surprising since your song writing skills are just as awesome. :) Hope to see more.
Posted at 10:44 on Dec 22, 2011
You are an amazing storyteller! I was caught up in every word. Very descriptive.
Posted at 10:45 on Dec 22, 2011
KEEP'EM COMING!
Posted at 10:45 on Dec 22, 2011
Soy chilena primero te escribire en español, me preocupe y rei con la historia, tienes una forma fluida para escribir, donde mezclas de forma impresionando los hechos produciendo diferentes emociones en el transcurso de tu narración, me gusto mucho.
Great! i love the way you write! love for you, your family and friends.
Posted at 10:45 on Dec 22, 2011
When can you write more? I loved the flow of your writing...made me feel like I was there as if you were telling me that story. It felt almost poetic in a way. Hope to read more from you Jackson !
Alexandria.
Posted at 10:46 on Dec 22, 2011
Great! (I could have done with out the fingers part...)
Posted at 10:46 on Dec 22, 2011
You are just talented all around. I look forward to being able to read more!
Posted at 10:46 on Dec 22, 2011
Thank god for the happy ending!!!! Apart from the laceration . Very well written. Look forward to reading more. Lovely pic by the way :0) xxx
Posted at 10:46 on Dec 22, 2011
You've painted a beautiful picture of love, music and passion. I can only hope to hear more from you in the future. The way you have with words pulls me in and makes me want to continue through the story, hunt you down and ask for more.
Posted at 10:46 on Dec 22, 2011
we'll thats better than I could do, dammit so your good at everything? that's not even fair, haha :) kept it up fantastic work. :)
Posted at 10:46 on Dec 22, 2011
Really well-written, Jackson! You make us feel like we were there. If we can put ourselves in your place then you have done a really good job of writing. At the same time, you allow us a glimpse into what makes you who you are.
Posted at 10:47 on Dec 22, 2011
I have never heard a attempted robbery sound so poetic.
Posted at 10:47 on Dec 22, 2011
JACKSON SOLO PUEDO DECIRTE ES QUE ESTE AMOR POR LA MUSICA QUE TENES TRASCIENDE EL LENGUAJE..... ONLY LOVE FOR YOU FROM ARGENTINA
Posted at 10:47 on Dec 22, 2011
I love your way of story telling, very captivating. Love you Jackson!
Posted at 10:47 on Dec 22, 2011
I really like your chronicle; it's so detailed and well-written! I was wondering how you got injured, and now I got my answer; I really love it, you should write more articles like this one, it's a way to tell a little piece of your life to the people who follow and support you like me.
I want read more!
Posted at 10:47 on Dec 22, 2011
Very well written. More please.
Posted at 10:48 on Dec 22, 2011
Please, do continue writing!!!! You are a true artist.
Awesome how you told the story!
Posted at 10:48 on Dec 22, 2011
That was a fantastic article, Jackson. It was so vivid and clear. I felt like I was there watching it all unfold. So, yes please, keep writing!!!!
Posted at 10:48 on Dec 22, 2011
VERY WELL WRITTEN JACKSON!! I'M WONDERING HOW IT HAPPENED. MERRY CHRISTMAS 2 U AND UR FAMILY!!!!
Posted at 10:48 on Dec 22, 2011
HAHAHAHAHAHA. I'm sorry that was the most amazing description of a fight and love for a guitar I have ever seen. It was beautiful, truly beautiful and I am sorry you're gorgeous face got hit. I'll find that shadowy figure and make him regret the day he laid a hand upon you and your one true love.
Posted at 10:48 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson - this is great! U are talented with everything u endeavor to take on!! Would love to read more from u!
Posted at 10:48 on Dec 22, 2011
I give you props for going after the guy, that takes guts!
As always, beautifully written like your songs :) You are a very talented artist. Keep up the good work and you will continue to go far :)
Posted at 10:48 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson, Great job. Your conclusion was very descriptive and it was like I was there with you when you had your love back in your arms. :)
Posted at 10:49 on Dec 22, 2011
well.. i see many like what you have written.. so not to break from the trend.. i'll just say it's ok...but.. i did really like how you played the blood thirsty vampire that wanted to kill all... but dammit could not....i wish i had a chance to try my acting dream as you are
Posted at 10:49 on Dec 22, 2011
Wow, at the end I wanted it to keep going. That is a sign of a good writer. :)
Posted at 10:49 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson, this is fantastic! I really liked your use of personifications and descriptions :) and just saying ... best definition of the word 'hey!' Ever.
Can't wait to read more of your stuff!
Posted at 10:49 on Dec 22, 2011
Oh my... That was amazing Jackson!!! I am picking up writing myself maybe one day you'll be buying my book.
Posted at 10:49 on Dec 22, 2011
This was freaking awesome! It was like I was reading an amazing book. Mad props dude, mad props.
Posted at 10:50 on Dec 22, 2011
You rock Jackson! So happy you're love wasn't lost forever!
A love worth fighting for...
Can't wait to read your next article!
Posted at 10:50 on Dec 22, 2011
Wow what amazing talent you have as a writer! Gorgeous, hot & Soooo talented! Anything you can't do?!
Posted at 10:50 on Dec 22, 2011
Love stories with happy ending! Love u Jackson!
Posted at 10:51 on Dec 22, 2011
This is wonderful and very well written. I love the emotion and the comedy. Im glad you got your guitar back Jackson.
Posted at 10:51 on Dec 22, 2011
Almost cried for Betty!
Im glad that you got your love back, keep writing!
Posted at 10:51 on Dec 22, 2011
you should write books!!!
Posted at 10:51 on Dec 22, 2011
Love it! Such beautiful writing, Jackson has a gift for stringing words together!!
Posted at 10:51 on Dec 22, 2011
I love the way you tell a story. Please write more often! I'd still like to see you publish a book of your photography and poetry :)
Posted at 10:51 on Dec 22, 2011
I love seeing this side of your talent being showcased Jackson. You are such a versatile and gifted individual. Your talent has such a broad spectrum! Your writing capabilities match your acting and singing capabilities well! You are so unique, personable and genuine and it's great to see how you connect with people!
Posted at 10:51 on Dec 22, 2011
Seriously, I loved this. Now we /finally/ find out what happened. :)
Posted at 10:52 on Dec 22, 2011
This is a most excellent article Jax! I am
glad you prevailed and got your love back! I would caution you however to be less impulsive in the future! Dean would be most upset if you were to never return to him. :( The world would miss you as well! (hope I don't sound like too much of a mom!)
Please please keep writing!
Posted at 10:52 on Dec 22, 2011
I loved the way you wrote the article, how you tell the story is fantastic. The best part of it is that you let us see how much you love and respect music. The sweetest thing is that you named ur guitar as Betty, that's trully wonderfull for me, I mean, musical instruments have soul, they got life. Thanks for sharing this. :)
Posted at 10:52 on Dec 22, 2011
I absolutely loved how descriptive you were. This is truly a great piece of work. Completely Brilliant and I'm glad you got your Betty back! Bravo!
Posted at 10:52 on Dec 22, 2011
Aww, nothing can keep true love apart!
Posted at 10:52 on Dec 22, 2011
Very well written and entertaining. From te very first paragraph detailing your hot and heavy new romance, My Best Girl by Lucero lodged itself firmly in my head. It'll probably be there all night but s'all good cause it's a pretty kickass song.
I love that you took such a story-teller route with this and strongly suggest that you do it more often. Also, the translation of "Hey!" got an audible giggle-snort type of laugh out of me. Well done, sir =)
Posted at 10:52 on Dec 22, 2011
And "hey" gets its own thought bubble. LOL
Great piece! More please!!
Posted at 10:52 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson, what a great story! You're definately a writer, must be the musician in you. Hopefully we'll be seeing more stories from you. I'm sorry to see your handsome face injured, but it was done in the name of love!
Posted at 10:53 on Dec 22, 2011
LOL!
Well, that's quite a romantic story!
I love the way you tell it, making it heartfelt and funny at the same time... (I sure hope that was your intention!).
Stupid thing to do though, going after someone like this. Could have been hurt! And your fans would like that now would they? :-)
Hope your love had some talent in dressing wounds...:P
Sorry if I "sound" a bit weird (hey! Here I am picturing myself as a guitar! I wonder why that is...). Since I usually "play" in french, my english is a bit out of tune.
Keep writing!
Posted at 10:53 on Dec 22, 2011
I love it, great story. I want to read more!
Posted at 10:53 on Dec 22, 2011
Excellent job kiddo, you are gifted in all forms of communication be it music, producing, acting,photography, writing or just talking honestly with your friends and fans. GOD has gifted you, use them all and often.
Posted at 10:53 on Dec 22, 2011
Wow. your very good at writting and grabbing the reader to make them want to finsh. great job!
Posted at 10:53 on Dec 22, 2011
Having heard the lyrics you write there's no way you should never doubt your talent for writing and this just proves, in all it's forms. I hope you do write more of this stuff, I'll read it in a heartbeat!!!!
Posted at 10:53 on Dec 22, 2011
Well that finally answers the question, "How did Jackson get the black eye?" LOL Nicely written with the passion you display in everything you do. I am glad you recovered your love.
Posted at 10:53 on Dec 22, 2011
Glad you got your "Betty" back...and I finally got an answer to my "Why didn't Jackson ever take off his sunglasses at the Stockton show?" question answered!!! That was my first (of many) time seeing 100 Monkeys and it was beyond awesome!!
Posted at 10:53 on Dec 22, 2011
Very nice Jackson! I highly enjoyed it. Is there anything you can't do? You are a very talented individual and I look forward to more things fron you. Much love.
Posted at 10:54 on Dec 22, 2011
Vivid descriptions. I could feel what you felt. Calling someone "a swimming little spunk in your fathers left testicle" is priceless. I may have to store that for future use. Thank you for sharing. I sincerely hope you continue to write. I would love to read more.
Posted at 10:54 on Dec 22, 2011
Awesome! Purely awesome, you told the story beautifully, it captivated me!
Posted at 10:54 on Dec 22, 2011
lmao. a beaut of a story if i've ever heard one :P
Posted at 10:54 on Dec 22, 2011
You have a very 'novel' style... writing so formally... excellent word skills... a bit like 'Edward' really... what don't you do well... I'm glad you got your guitar back... =)♥
Posted at 10:54 on Dec 22, 2011
Wow. You can hurl some crazy, creative,(and deserved!)curses. What kind of villain steals a man's guitar? Thank goodness you got Betty back.
Please write more about your travels! You and the 100 Monkeys seem like you are always having so much fun.
Plus, this was an epically classic story. Boy loves girl, girl gets stolen away by a heinous interloper, boy rescues girl, and they make beautiful music together.
Posted at 10:58 on Dec 22, 2011
Your guitar is one lucky girl!
Posted at 10:58 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson, thank you for taking us through such a wild adventure! So well written! We would love to read an entire book from you someday. The way you see things and transfer them into words and a story, is such a delight to read! You must write more - period. First your poetry, then lyrics and now this. Perfect :)
We remember seeing you at a show in LA with that shiner- wow we had no idea... Here's to true love! You'll be Betty's hero for life ;)
Posted at 10:58 on Dec 22, 2011
That was beautiful, Jackson! The language is exquisite and the storyline is quite enticing. You should definitely write more. I remember reading some of your poems on the 100 Monkeys Myspace page and they were phenomenal. Keep it up :)
P.s. I hope you had a wonderful birthday!
Katie
Posted at 10:59 on Dec 22, 2011
wow that's all i can really say to that you had me hooked from the start at the edge of my seat, i was like NOOOO not Betty lol but i'm glad you got her back in the end. Your a great writer/actor/musician and i look forward to seeing more stuff from you.
Posted at 10:59 on Dec 22, 2011
I’m really impressed with the way you manipulate the written word. I got a kick out of your explanation behind what you actually meant when you said “Hey”.
Posted at 11:00 on Dec 22, 2011
The article is written well. The emotion is warm, soft, and heartfelt. I like how you've taken the time to describe the humor, and strength with the way you care about Betty. It also has an abundance of adjectives as far as the way its written. I'm sure there will be more where this one came from. I've written in the past too, but haven't had it published, I criticize myself too much.
Posted at 11:00 on Dec 22, 2011
Wow Jackson, this is really great!! I could envision every little detail of your story. Some just talk and you have to use your own imagination how it would look, but you put us right in the drivers seat. Thank you for sharing and I hope we get to read more from you. Glad your eye is better!! Merry Christmas my friend. Please tell the other guys I hope they have a very merry christmas also.
Posted at 11:00 on Dec 22, 2011
Wow this was an amazing piece of writing Jackson, really great story. Keep it up! :)
Posted at 11:00 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson I loved this. I think it showed us a personal side of you that we probably don't get to see much. i would personally love to read more of your travel tales. I wish you the best of luck with your acting, the band, and writing. I think you are good at what ever you set your mind to do.
Posted at 11:00 on Dec 22, 2011
Well written and hope more to come. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Did not know u were photographer. Best wishes for the new year
Posted at 11:01 on Dec 22, 2011
Interesting story.Keep up the good work! ;)
Posted at 11:01 on Dec 22, 2011
Well written and hope more to come. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Did not know u were photographer. Best wishes for the new year
Posted at 11:01 on Dec 22, 2011
Definitely hook me. Amazing writer and can't wait to read more!
Posted at 11:01 on Dec 22, 2011
Your first self-written article is beautiful and the story is very captivating and entertaining, and I really enjoy your "Heys" whether it's mean to say "hey darlin'" or "You son of a bitch! That's my guitar! Get your ass back here before I cut off your sticky fingers and shove them so deeply into every known orifice that your parents will reel back and choose to never consummate that moment of lust years ago when you were merely a swimming little spunk in your father's left testicle!" That really made my night... you are an awesome actor, musician and writer. Much Love and Respect. Xoxo-Amelia
Posted at 11:02 on Dec 22, 2011
Omg! I'm glad you got Betty back, Jackson! That explanation of hey was pretty hilarious but admittedly appropriate. What was that s.o.b thinking?! Can't wait to read more from you Jackson! :) this article was so well written! I could see it happening in my head as I read it! Love it! :)
Posted at 11:02 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson, what can't you do? You are very talented and I am so glad you are willing to share that with all of us. Kudos.
Posted at 11:02 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson, you're absolutely brilliant in all that you do. I must say, you definitely rocked the black eye for the rest of that tour.. a badge of honor, if I must say so myself..
Let that be a lesson to all who try to come between a musician and his/her instruments.. never try to pry them apart.. you will go down swinging and you'll get hurt and run away scared of said musician beating you up.
Glad you rescued your Gibson and you only received a black eye. Could've been much worse.
Jackson Rathbone = 1
Guitar Stealer = 0.
Please write more, and hopefully the stories won't be so far apart.
Posted at 11:03 on Dec 22, 2011
Dude you got into a right with who knows what over a guitar? Not smart! The mom in me says the guitar can be replaced but you cannot......
Posted at 11:03 on Dec 22, 2011
Is there anything Jackson Rathbone can't do? He's a triple (more actually) acting, musical genius, and a brilliant writer. Damn good looking to boot. I'm even more smitten now.
Posted at 11:03 on Dec 22, 2011
That was awesome! Is there a book in your near future? I would so read it!
Posted at 11:03 on Dec 22, 2011
Awesome writing Jackson, keep it coming!
Posted at 11:03 on Dec 22, 2011
Love love love well written you'd do an English teacher proud.
Posted at 11:04 on Dec 22, 2011
OMG! Love it!!
Greeting from Venezuela :D
Posted at 11:05 on Dec 22, 2011
Beautifully written. Very moving. I'm glad all ended well. Hope to see more stories from you, Jackson. You really have a way with words. So touching. All the best. xoxo Kathy
Posted at 11:05 on Dec 22, 2011
Amazing! This is awesome. Continue writing and doing what you love. You freaking rock.
Posted at 11:05 on Dec 22, 2011
wow....that is very good....keep them comes Jack....your are a good writer and top of all the other talents you have....way to go....hope you have a good Christmas and New Year too....
Posted at 11:06 on Dec 22, 2011
Yes, please write more. Enjoyed this expose.
Posted at 11:06 on Dec 22, 2011
Great fun to read. I look forward to more tales of your tours.
Posted at 11:06 on Dec 22, 2011
Sorry that you got hurt, but every musician I have ever met at concerts always say their instruments are either their loves or their best friends. Maybe that guy will think twice beforehe tries to steal somehong else!
Not only is the story well written, but it makes the reader feel as if we are chasing right along with you.
Posted at 11:06 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson is gifted in meny things! Now i want to hunt down more of his work i love it.
Posted at 11:07 on Dec 22, 2011
There is hope for love, after all :)
Posted at 11:07 on Dec 22, 2011
Very, very good. You have a flair for the written word, Jackson. I would love to read more stories from you, should they be true stories or fiction. Keep up the good work, my friend.
Posted at 11:07 on Dec 22, 2011
Well written. Grabbed you reader's attention and held it all the way through. You also did well evoking emotions. Would love to see more of your writing skills.
Posted at 11:08 on Dec 22, 2011
Holy crap Jackson! You REALLY love that guitar! I'm glad you didn't let the cretin have it! And I have to say, your brow-beaten, uh, brow is kinda sexy! I liked the article, but you could use a beta (I'd be happy to offer my services); there are a few grammatical errors, but otherwise it's a good article. I wish you the best of luck - looking forward to hearing Betty in the background on Liquid Zoo!
Posted at 11:08 on Dec 22, 2011
There is hope for love, after all :)
Posted at 11:08 on Dec 22, 2011
There are a few run on sentences and unnecessary "fluff," which occurs frequently in personal stories to emphasize the writers emotion. Honestly, I think it's good for your first article. It could be better but I imagine, in time, it will be. Love your music! Keep on rockin' and writin'!! -Katie
Posted at 11:08 on Dec 22, 2011
Love the story. Happy you were able to save Betty from the horriable person, and that you weren't seriously hurt in any way. Hope she was unharmed in the altercation. You have such a way with words. You were given a talent with writing, acting, and singing
Posted at 11:08 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson,
First be advised that not all are going to like your work, but no matter what anyone says it's YOUR work and it is authentic and more importantly it's from your heart so that means more than any review that can be given.
Now I personally liked the piece because once again it was authentic, I liked the fact that you took the time to show the scenery around you and other bits and pieces, that gave my imagination something to see...I would love to see more of this..you should start a blog of some sorts...
Posted at 11:09 on Dec 22, 2011
Wow is there anything you cant do LOL
It was a great read ...look forward to reading more :)
Posted at 11:09 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson you're a good person, God willing, life will not do it to you again.But is beautiful text!! With love.
Posted at 11:09 on Dec 22, 2011
jackson is such a great story teller!
Posted at 11:09 on Dec 22, 2011
Love the way you write... Hate that it happened though... Looking forward to hearing all the beautiful music you and Betty will make together...
Posted at 11:10 on Dec 22, 2011
The things we do for love! This is really well written. It feels extremelly real. Great job.
I'm really glad you got Betty back. Good luck on your next tour!
Posted at 11:10 on Dec 22, 2011
LOVED this...nothing else to say just awesome :) Maybe we will see another 100 Monkeys book in the future....with more great traveling anecdotes....we know you have em ;)
Posted at 11:10 on Dec 22, 2011
Fascinating! I love it! The suspense was great!:)
Posted at 11:10 on Dec 22, 2011
I like how vivid the images of your battle for your love was,You can tell that you put your heart and soul into all of your passions be it song writng or a eventful story with a happy ending about your luv.
Posted at 11:10 on Dec 22, 2011
Very well written... I enjoyed it.. Hopefully I will be able to read more
Posted at 11:10 on Dec 22, 2011
wow so glad you got betty back and you weren't too hurt. Loved your writing and hope to read more that you write, your talent is endless !
Posted at 11:11 on Dec 22, 2011
I like how vivid the images of your battle for your love was,You can tell that you put your heart and soul into all of your passions be it song writng or a eventful story with a happy ending about your luv.
Posted at 11:11 on Dec 22, 2011
Awe, that was beautiful Jackson! That's what every man should do for the love of his life! Thank goodness you and Betty wasn't too hurt! Keep writing darlin' youve got a way with words!!!
Posted at 11:11 on Dec 22, 2011
From someone who loves reading but knows little about the art of writing a great story: I really enjoyed this so thank you for writing it! You have an amazing talent for story telling and I feel that this story will stick in my memory because of the way it was told. While reading this I felt immediately engaged and almost as though I could see you there. I also enjoyed the bit of humor you threw in.
I sincerely hope you write more!
Posted at 11:11 on Dec 22, 2011
Wow Jackson! I know Betty and she is pretty amazing! Glad you didn't loose her that night! You are a knight in shining armor for her!
Posted at 11:11 on Dec 22, 2011
That was written very well. I think you should keep writing. By the way I am glad that you got your love back.
Posted at 11:12 on Dec 22, 2011
um...okay...wow! I only hope you will fight that hard for THE woman in your life! Good to know you are a dangerous man to mess with. You won't find me anywhere near your band's instruments...I promise...lol... and good luck to your band and your future. Oh, and may I add....great writing too.
Posted at 11:12 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson, I could actually picture the scene in my mind, your words are very visual. Great work, I enjoyed it very much. Can't wait to hear the new album.
Posted at 11:13 on Dec 22, 2011
You gave a great description of the setting and your feelings at those moments I could pull the scene in my mind with smells and taste.I did laugh at your plans for sticky fingers and his fingers.It was good so keep at it..
Posted at 11:13 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson,
First be advised that not all are going to like your work, but no matter what anyone says it's YOUR work and it is authentic and more importantly it's from your heart so that means more than any review that can be given.
Now I personally liked the piece because once again it was authentic, I liked the fact that you took the time to show the scenery around you and other bits and pieces, that gave my imagination something to see...I would love to see more of this..you should start a blog of some sorts...
Posted at 11:13 on Dec 22, 2011
Awe, that was beautiful Jackson! That's what every man should do for the love of his life! Thank goodness you and Betty wasn't too hurt! Keep writing darlin' youve got a way with words!!!
Posted at 11:13 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson, what excellent writing!! You're talented in so many ways! Acting, music, writing. You put the rest of us to shame!!! You definitely need to write more!!!
Posted at 11:14 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson you have a talent in every facid of your life. Singer, songwriter, just a writer in general, great actor, most of all a wonderful entertainer in anything you do for the fans. You have an incredible talent, looking forward to seeing more of your writing, it gives me inspiration to try go back to finishing my book again. Who knows I might write a movie script one day you can act in.
Posted at 11:15 on Dec 22, 2011
Interesting story. Very descriptive. A tad bit heavy in the adjectives but a fun read. Keep 'em coming!
Posted at 11:15 on Dec 22, 2011
MORE PLEASE!
Posted at 11:15 on Dec 22, 2011
Loved your story, very well written and I'm glad you were able to get your Betty back. Hope to hear about more of your adventures!
Posted at 11:16 on Dec 22, 2011
Exciting! It got the old heart pumping I must say. Well done JR.
Posted at 11:17 on Dec 22, 2011
Exciting! It got the old heart pumping I must say. Well done JR.
Posted at 11:17 on Dec 22, 2011
I have to admit I laughed out loud when you were describing what "Hey" meant. All around amazing person you are Mr. Rathbone. Glad you and Betty were reunited, you had a pretty gnarly black eye for your love.
Posted at 11:17 on Dec 22, 2011
WOW!!!! Very nicely done! One minute I was laughing, then holding my breath, & finally......."Oh my God"!!! Can't wait to read more from you!!!
Posted at 11:21 on Dec 22, 2011
Great, classic love story. Boy meets girl and falls in love. Boy takes girl on a road trip. Boy nearly loses girl in a dark alley but fights to get her back. I love it. Good job, Jackson. You've proven yourself to be an artist with your music and acting and now with your writing as well. Your words paint such a clear picture; it's entertaining. I hope for a chance to read more from you. It's clear you're not just another pretty face... well, a pretty face with a black eye.
Posted at 11:21 on Dec 22, 2011
amazing! both the physical and literary feat :). Continue to leave art wherever you go.
Posted at 11:22 on Dec 22, 2011
I was very happy to hear how passionate you were about your guitar, and even happier to hear that you got it back. I loved the sentence that started off the last paragraph and even had to repeat it slowly to the people in the room. I hope you continue writing and keep on smiling.
Posted at 11:22 on Dec 22, 2011
Loved it...you definitely have talent. Keep the creative juices flowing...you were born to share with the world!
Posted at 11:22 on Dec 22, 2011
The things we do for love! I'm glad you survived to share your experience. At least all that punk was swinging was a fist and not a weapon.
Posted at 11:25 on Dec 22, 2011
This is a wonderful story! You are a great artist Jackson! You are so talented, I love so much your work! I'm so glad that this story had an happy endings and that you got your Betty back! You are a wonderful writer, as well as a wonderful musician, actor , photographer, poet. I hope you can write more stories! I always will read everything you will write and I know that I will always love all your stories! Much love and respect. I love you
Posted at 11:25 on Dec 22, 2011
wow u were lucky u got it back i would fight too well one thing is for sure u might of got banged up but u put up a good fight in the process
:) love ur music & the western video on ur web site hope u will come to western washington soon so i can see u in concert or i can e-mail me anytime u want to talk
Liz
Posted at 11:25 on Dec 22, 2011
OMG, LOVE IT, U ARE PERFECT IN EVERY SENSE OF THE LIFE... I LOVE THE WAY YOU LOVE MUSIC, ACTING, SINGING, WRITING... THERE ARE NO WORDS, YOU ARE THE ONLY PERSON I KNOW, WHO DOES WHAT YOU LOVE AND LOVE WHAT YOU DOES SO DEEPLY... YOU ARE MY INSPIRATION, YOU ARE WHO HELP ME TO FOLLOW MY DREAMS AND DO WHAT I LOVE THE MOST... BECAUSE ALL OF THIS AND MORE, CAUSE I CAN SPEND THE WHOLE LIFE WRITING ABOUT THE WONDERFUL QUALITIES THAT SHAPE YOU... IS BECAUSE I LOVE YOU SO DEEPLY... HOPE SOME DAY CAN MEET YOU AND SPEND SOME TIME WITH YOU.
Posted at 11:26 on Dec 22, 2011
Loved the story, so glad that it had a somewhat happy ending. So not only is Jackson a talented singer, songwriter, and actor but now also a story teller. His writing made me feel like I was experiencing it for myself. So Jackson is in love with Betty and it sounds like I might need to change my name to Betty and get some loving from Jackson. Would love to read more travel pieces from Jackson he has quite a way with words that made me laugh out loud literally at work which had my co-workers looking at me strangely till I made them read his piece. Jackson keep up your writing and compile them into a short novel of all the hijinks that you and the rest of the band get into while on your for us all to read.
Posted at 11:26 on Dec 22, 2011
Interesting story! I loved your descriptions. I especially enjoyed your desc of "hey" we've all had those moments and it made me laugh. Hope to see more!
Posted at 11:26 on Dec 22, 2011
I have to say man, great job on getting a single syllable to get across a whole different message entirely. I wasn't aware that was quite possible. You did a really awesome job with this piece, hope to see more in the future. Not everyone can take a potentially boring piece and turn it into something entertaining, funny and informational. You deserve an A+, my fellow.
Posted at 11:27 on Dec 22, 2011
I like it a lot, I felt as if I were watching this all go down like a fly on the wall...
Posted at 11:27 on Dec 22, 2011
Wow!!! Certainly you have amazing talents!!!
Thank you for sharing this moments, this deepest feelings
And this lovely story.
Please don't stop writing.
Here in Mexico we wish you good luck
And Merry Christmas!!!!
Posted at 11:27 on Dec 22, 2011
Captivating! Jackson has the amazing ability to capture the reader's (or listener's) interest and keep him/her engaged and on edge. Thanks Jackson for sharing the experience! I would love to read your take on the impromptu concert at the duck pin bowling alley. That was my favorite moment from your 2010 tour.
Posted at 11:27 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson you did a wonderful job and it kept me captivated. It was funny, romantic, and joyous. It made me laugh. It made me nearly cry...(nearly...LOL). Seriously...I loved it. You did a terrific job and can't wait to read more.
Posted at 11:28 on Dec 22, 2011
It is always amazinng to hear stories from the road. Especially from your point of view. Would love to hear more. You really paint the picture.
Posted at 11:28 on Dec 22, 2011
Loved the article... I wanted to know more of what happened...like did the guy get caught? Well very well written... Good job Jackson
Posted at 11:29 on Dec 22, 2011
Nice. Gave me another reason to love you more! :) You're good at everything you do, so talented!
Posted at 11:30 on Dec 22, 2011
Nice. Gave me another reason to love you more! :) You're good at everything you do, so talented!
Posted at 11:30 on Dec 22, 2011
Nice. Gave me another reason to love you more! :) You're good at everything you do, so talented!
Posted at 11:30 on Dec 22, 2011
Great writing. Glad you got Betty back and your story had a happy ending. Love to read more of your travels. Keep up the great work.
Posted at 11:30 on Dec 22, 2011
This is beautifully written and I can picture the event unfolding. Fantastic job bringing all of the readers' senses to life. And a happy ending to boot. Keep writing as well as your other projects. We love everything you share with us! Thank you.
Posted at 11:34 on Dec 22, 2011
Excellent and descriptive narrative.
I especially enjoyed the insults hurled in the heat of battle.
Glad you were able to get your love back in your arms.
-Chele
Posted at 11:34 on Dec 22, 2011
That pic looks like it was taken while you still had adrenalin pumping in your veins. Not the wisest thing to do, but don't you love that you gave into instinct, wrestled like a wildcat and won? Amazing story. Love the "film noir" tone.
Posted at 11:36 on Dec 22, 2011
I hope your opinion of My Beloved City has not been Jaded. I love the article....Good job Jackson.
Posted at 11:36 on Dec 22, 2011
So crazy!! I have been to ALL the SF shows...even the one Jay wasnt at. : ) love these monkeys and glad u got ur lady back.
Posted at 11:36 on Dec 22, 2011
Is there anything you can not do Jackson?? Love your music and photographs you take most!!!
Posted at 11:37 on Dec 22, 2011
Please come visit my classroom and teach my students how to write like this!
Posted at 11:37 on Dec 22, 2011
Very well written! I, of course, am not surprised by this because of the amazing lyrics you also write! I loved reading this and am so happy you got your Betty back!
The next time I talk to you at a show and you yell "Hey!", I might be a bit scared, though... ;-)
Posted at 11:37 on Dec 22, 2011
lo voy a refleccionar bien y despues te doy mi opinion
Posted at 11:38 on Dec 22, 2011
Fighting for the "woman" you love. Always worth the wound. ;)
Posted at 11:39 on Dec 22, 2011
I Loved your story it was very descriptive and I felt like I was their with you,im happy that you got Betty back.u
Posted at 11:39 on Dec 22, 2011
Such lovely work...I mean its so much talent u should take up writin books aswel. As I say ur such a talented person ur family should be very proud :) x
Posted at 11:41 on Dec 22, 2011
Well written. You found the humor in an dangerous situation. I was scared and amused at the same time. As a retired security officer I am relieved you were not left with a lifetime disability from the altercation and am happy you retrieved your "Betty"
In the future please try and remember that you are irreplaceable so please leave the pursuit of criminals to those that get paid to do it. Get a bodyguard if you don't already have one.
On Nov. 8th 1995 my daughter Connie was just 21 and working the night shift at an AM/PM on 38th and Pine in Tacoma WA. A man came in the store, he had a gun,,,he ordered her to give him the money out of the till ($250) then ordered her out the back door of the store. He assaulted her then shot her in the leg and head and left her for dead on the Fort Lewis Golf course. She survived and is high functioning brain damaged. AM/PM (L&I) awarded her $65,000 for the loss of her right temporal lobe of her brain. She lives in poverty, in a rodent infested trailer with a slum lord that will not pay for repairs. So the moral of this my story is "Please do not put yourself in harms way and carry a damn gun."
Posted at 11:42 on Dec 22, 2011
Jackson, it's amazing the way you write the story. That shows the incredible writer that you are, either to the songs like to tell stories. I'm so glad that this story of Betty and you have had a happy ending.
I'm so proud of you, because you showed to be a man who fights [literally] for what you want and loves.
I'm not good writer, therefore, I feel that opaque your wonderful way of writing, hahaha.
So... the only thing that I say is: I admire you and love you, and (again) I'm so proud of you, proud of what you are.
Posted at 11:42 on Dec 22, 2011
Impeccable piece.
Started blatantly nostalgic... informative without too much over-sharing.
I applaud the part where you seem cynically disdainful.
Here's hoping for more...
Posted at 11:44 on Dec 22, 2011
This was a thrill to read! I was holding mu breath at the end! Pls write more!
Posted at 11:44 on Dec 22, 2011
I was at one of those shows. That show completely knocked me out of ym comfort zone and dumped me into the middle of some of the most amazing music I have ever heard. The energy was fun and even a white girl with no rhythm danced. Thankfully it was dark so no one saw.
Clearly music and acting aren't your only gifts. This was wonderful, eloquent, witty, and funny. Oh to be a fly on the wall for this.
Glad your love is safe.
Posted at 11:45 on Dec 22, 2011
OGM! this is just another thing to add to your talents Jackson, very good writing and I love to see more of this, so keep it up!
Posted at 11:48 on Dec 22, 2011
I am sorry you got hurt, but happy to know you got the love of your life back!
Posted at 11:50 on Dec 22, 2011
You're hot, AND you can write... My kind of guy :)
Posted at 11:50 on Dec 22, 2011
Your writing put me in the moment with you - I could feel the despair when you lost, and the excitement when you found, your love. I hope that you are able to write more - and I look forward to reading more. Job very well done.
Posted at 11:50 on Dec 22, 2011
OMG YES! I LOVE that guitar! Write more Jackson!!! I love you!
Posted at 11:54 on Dec 22, 2011
Write a short story or two, perhaps a book, you have the skill.
Posted at 11:54 on Dec 22, 2011
That is a great article of work. I read this with great desire to read every word as the clear images of your trist were going through my mind. I really enjoyed reading this like a good cup of coffee you discover you have drank to fast and wished there was more.
Posted at 11:55 on Dec 22, 2011
Amazing your so amazing your talent is beyond your years keep grounded and even biger things will come love Adele
Posted at 11:56 on Dec 22, 2011
Truly a girl worth saving....
Well written!
.... I may need to borrow your version of "Hey!"
Posted at 11:57 on Dec 22, 2011
I feel unfulfilled. What a fabulous tale, but I would have liked more--more everything; more detail, more length, more introspection. I would have liked to see that struggle in my mind's eye like it was pulled taffy. You have a gift with words, but I'm a greedy creature and I want more. (That, in case you haven't realized, is a good thing.)
Posted at 11:57 on Dec 22, 2011
Hell of a backstory...left testicle to guitar thief. One question though...Why the left testicle? :) Just kidding. Letting someone read your writing is a very intimate thing; much like writing song lyrics, I'm assuming. I appreciated the opportunity to be a part of an extremely private and emotional moment in your life. Thanks for letting me into your head. Love to hear more.
Posted at 12:02 on Dec 23, 2011
Music and Spirit are the truest forms of love, Passion adds a little lust. ;-) Glad your Betty remained with you as you continue your journey.
Remember, "Without music, life would be a mistake." - Nietzsche
You should also continue to write!
Posted at 12:02 on Dec 23, 2011
It's very well written though a little hard to follow because you wrote it from ur pov when most articles are written third person. It is very disturbing that someone would have. The nerve to do that to you or any famous person but its unfortunaly a fact of life. I hope you heal well and if you already have great to hear it. (Maybe I missed it but it would've been nice to have a time frame) good luck many blessings and keep up all ur talents!
Posted at 12:03 on Dec 23, 2011
Great job Jax!
Posted at 12:06 on Dec 23, 2011
You have a very seductive way of writing, You should write a book of poetry, I would be the first to buy it, and I loved how you described the word "HEY" . You have an amazing gift. Btw that black eye was hot!
Posted at 12:06 on Dec 23, 2011
Jackson, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your article. I am impressed, and I didn't realize prior to this article that you had a band. I will certainly check your music out and no doubt become a fan and a happy woman. I hope to check your band out live in the near future. I pray you all stay safe and find many blessings through your tour and music along the way. I loved your character in all of the released twilight movies; I especially look forward to seeing Breaking Dawn, Part 2. If there is such a thing, I am team Jasper and Alice. It isn't all about Bella, Edward and Jacob. There is something to be said about great characters played by fabulous actors, that aren't always the center of attention. You both did a beautiful job, congratulations on the success of the movies. I pray you have much success in your future endeavors. God bless you.
Posted at 12:08 on Dec 23, 2011
Is there anything you can't do?
Posted at 12:08 on Dec 23, 2011
Good story, very well written :) Even though English is not my first language, I really liked it. You definitely got a talent there! Hope to read more stories from you in the future. Keep the good things coming....
Posted at 12:09 on Dec 23, 2011
What an inspiring love story you've written here. The personification of your beautiful lady, Betty, was wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing your passion with us, Jackson. You truly are one of a kind, and a gift to other art lovers.
This story brings truth to the myth: "love conquers all." (Even sticky fingered guitar gankers) I'm so glad you saved your sweetheart, so that y'all can continue to share your amazing music with the world.
Posted at 12:10 on Dec 23, 2011
Jackson, LOVE LOVE how i was into the love story from the start! You have a great talent!! Would love to read more..
Posted at 12:10 on Dec 23, 2011
You did a good job, Jackson. I especially like the run-on sentence explanation of "Hey!" It made me laugh. The article has great character! You should write more.
Posted at 12:19 on Dec 23, 2011
Love the story. Happy you were able to save Betty from the horriable person, and that you weren't seriously hurt in any way. Hope she was unharmed in the altercation. You have such a way with words. You were given a talent with writing, acting, and singing
Posted at 12:20 on Dec 23, 2011
"Swimming little spunk in your father's left testicle" was the best part. I had a good giggle over that one!
I would love to read more. I do hope you write and publish some more!
Posted at 12:20 on Dec 23, 2011
I was afraid that you'd never get Betty back, gotta love a happy ending... By the way that was great Jackson : ) please do another ;)
Posted at 12:24 on Dec 23, 2011
Well done, Jackson! Would love to read more.
Posted at 12:24 on Dec 23, 2011
Super descriptive. Nicely done. I am sorry for your boo boo though.
Posted at 12:25 on Dec 23, 2011
That's awesome! It's very exciting to read and I think you should write more stories!!! 😄 and I'm ur biggest fan hehe❤
Posted at 12:31 on Dec 23, 2011
Incredibly well written, one of the best short stories I've ever read and "up there" with the big names of the profession. Please, Sir, more!!!!!
Posted at 12:31 on Dec 23, 2011
That was really well written. Your descriptions just leapt off the pages and when it ended I was like Hey!! Which is the universal word meaning damn I want more. Your talent knows no bounds
Posted at 12:32 on Dec 23, 2011
Wow Jackson, this is good! You really know how to write. You're talented in many ways, love ya :)
Posted at 12:34 on Dec 23, 2011
From one writer to another, you've got quite a way with words! Your description pulled me right in to the story and I even winced at the end when you fell to the concrete.
Great job! The things we do for our passions, talk about suffering for your art! You can even take a deeper look at the story and not only is it about you fighting for a physical object that means the world to you, but you also fought for something greater, you fought for your passion, your talent, and your dreams. Very inspiring indeed.
I hope you write more in the future because you've got a unique point of view that is hard to find these days.
Posted at 12:34 on Dec 23, 2011
Great story! Keeps you interested and was a lil intense! Loved the ending! Awesome job Jackson!
Posted at 12:35 on Dec 23, 2011
I loved it! Such a great article!
Posted at 12:38 on Dec 23, 2011
Mr Rathbone,
this was a great piece of writing.
I can haz more now?
Posted at 12:40 on Dec 23, 2011
There is an error in the intro
"Here, her writes about how her got that black eye as part of our Winter Issue's Travel Tales..." should read here, he writes about how he got the black eye....
It is too to bad that your car was stolen, however I did enjoy reading your adventure.
Posted at 12:42 on Dec 23, 2011
Wow. That's really all I can say.
You have a wonderful way of describing things! I could almost see the scene you were describing.
Posted at 12:44 on Dec 23, 2011
great article written by Jackson.sucks he had to get hit to get his beloved Betty back.I would've done the same thing as Jackson if that was me.you cant be without something you love that much.he is reunited with his love and all is right with the world.
Posted at 12:44 on Dec 23, 2011
Great story Jackson.. Have you thought about making a song out of it! Could be a great love song! Just saying!!! Good luck to you in all of your endeavors. Looking forward to seeing you more on the screen also.
Take care and watch for those shadows!
Posted at 12:47 on Dec 23, 2011
What a great story, you described everything in such detail, I'll be sitting here waiting for more.
Posted at 12:47 on Dec 23, 2011
Thank you, Jackson, your story sort of bewitched me :) and didn't let me go till the very end... glad it was a happy end, and you were alive and with your "love in your arms"!
Your writing is off the beaten line and captivating, indeed!
I will translate your article into russian so that my friends could read it, if you don't mind!
And please-please, be safe, have a care!)
Posted at 12:47 on Dec 23, 2011
Thank you, Jackson, your story sort of bewitched me :) and didn't let me go till the very end... glad it was a happy end, and you were alive and with your "love in your arms"!
Your writing is off the beaten line and captivating, indeed!
I will translate your article into russian so that my friends could read it, if you don't mind!
And please-please, be safe, have a care!)
Posted at 12:50 on Dec 23, 2011
Thank you, Jackson, your story sort of bewitched me :) and didn't let me go till the very end... glad it was a happy end, and you were alive and with your "love in your arms"!
Your writing is off the beaten line and captivating, indeed!
I will translate your article into russian so that my friends could read it, if you don't mind!
And please-please, be safe, have a care!)
Posted at 12:51 on Dec 23, 2011
LOL, this is very well written. I have to admit, I kind of a bit jealous on the "I was in love" part. I never knew it turn out to be a guitar :D. But the story is well written, It's silly, simple, but simply will put smile on everyone's faces that read it.
And....even with your disheveled hair and cut on your face, yo do still look hot and handsome...
Cheers
Posted at 12:51 on Dec 23, 2011
Thank you, Jackson, your story sort of bewitched me :) and didn't let me go till the very end... glad it was a happy end, and you were alive and with your "love in your arms"!
Your writing is off the beaten line and captivating, indeed!
I will translate your article into russian so that my friends could read it, if you don't mind!
And please-please, be safe, have a care!)
Posted at 12:53 on Dec 23, 2011
Such a wonderful piece of passion about a beloved treasure. I do hope you continue writing and sharing your stories with us.
I do hope Betty survived the ordeal with no trauma or injury :)
Love & Respect,
Stephanie
Posted at 12:56 on Dec 23, 2011
This is amazing. It is exceptionally well written. Your emotions carriaes through to the reader. This effect allows the reader to see the story as if they were present, as if they were an unseen observer. Again this is an amazing piece of work.
Posted at 12:57 on Dec 23, 2011
Very well written. Story was very entertaining and kept the reader wanting more. Would be great if you would think about writing a script for a movie. Love your work, both writing and in the movies.
Posted at 12:59 on Dec 23, 2011
I am in awe of your writing skills Mr. Jackson Rathbone. I felt like I was actually seeing all of this take place rather then reading it. Not jus seeing it but feeling it and tasting it! You have a way with words.
Posted at 1:05 on Dec 23, 2011
This is great! More, more, more x x
Posted at 1:14 on Dec 23, 2011
Thriller author! You've a very visual kind of diction.
Hope to read more!
Keep it up!!!!!!
Posted at 1:16 on Dec 23, 2011
oh god!!!!!!u write well.....specially the part where u expressed ur 'hey' for that guy n u fought for ur betty,the guitar ....=)....u r a nice person!!!!!u can write well for teens.....u'll rock their world n u cud possibly start such blogs about ur 'anecdote' (as i put it more accurately)!!!luking further for more stories!!!!
Posted at 1:22 on Dec 23, 2011
I love it! This is very well written. I can actually see this happening. Thank you for sharing. I love the fact that you took something so serious and put a rather humorous tone to it!
Posted at 1:22 on Dec 23, 2011
Written like a poet writes. Vivid descriptions ("a long line of broken strings and humbuckers" echoes m/f relationships nicely, "guitar case containing a sleeping object of ebony, mahogany and my bleeding, beating heart" is particularly effective). The "hey"-that-meant line is very clever. It might work better if it stuck with just one of the images involved. The switch in idea diverts the line of thought rather abruptly and disrupts the build-up to the fight. Smart concept. Engages and moves the reader emotionally. Good work.
Posted at 1:23 on Dec 23, 2011
That was great stuff there. I wish I wrote that good. You sure are a talented one Mr. Rathbone. Don't stop writing (nor acting and singing).
Posted at 1:25 on Dec 23, 2011
Like they say, alls fair in love and war! My husband's love is a blond fender he's had since he was 17, it's beautiful, never let's it out his sight! X
Posted at 1:26 on Dec 23, 2011
Interesting story... I loved that you came to Reno in that old van.. You made my week by just shaking my hand and giving me your famous smile. Keep writing. Catch you on the road.
Posted at 1:27 on Dec 23, 2011
Interesting story... I loved that you came to Reno in that old van.. You made my week by just shaking my hand and giving me your famous smile. Keep writing. Catch you on the road.
Posted at 1:35 on Dec 23, 2011
This was really good and you should definatly write more. :))
Posted at 1:37 on Dec 23, 2011
Very well written. I could clearly see everything happen in my mind.
Hope you read more from you in future
Posted at 1:43 on Dec 23, 2011
I did enjoy reading this though i'm not usually one for short stories. Very descriptive and captivating. I believe its hard to make an attempted robbery sound so poetic but you have accomplished that quite successfully! Intriguing stuff.
Posted at 1:45 on Dec 23, 2011
Fabulous article! Apparently Jackson Rathbone has a bit of a hidden talent as a writer! : )
Posted at 1:46 on Dec 23, 2011
Love it !! hope u do more writing would love to read it !
Posted at 1:46 on Dec 23, 2011
"You son of a bitch! That's my guitar! Get your ass back here before I cut off your sticky fingers and shove them so deeply into every known orifice that your parents will reel back and choose to never consummate that moment of lust years ago when you were merely a swimming little spunk in your father's left testicle!"...= sheer poetry...
and how in the hell did you make a ass kickin' knock-down-drag-out fight sound like the best soul connecting sex ever?...thoust truly be talented; The force is strong with this one!
Posted at 1:47 on Dec 23, 2011
I found myself deeply concerned for Betty, and wanting to fly into action myself! Thank you for the story!
Posted at 1:51 on Dec 23, 2011
Wow this is very well written. It’s entertaining, funny and incredibly descriptive; I enjoyed reading it. Also I love how you fight for what you love. I applaud your work and look forward to reading more.
Posted at 2:05 on Dec 23, 2011
good material for movie etude! May be multivocal. Story in your style, nice work.
Keep writing;
Posted at 2:07 on Dec 23, 2011
Jackson that was awesome. Can't wait until your book comes out. I feel it is time you wrote one. Good job and keep on hugging Betty. Merry Christmas, and Happy Birthday again. Have a great New Year, and may all of God's blessings be upon you. Be safe. Good luck with your next tour. Love the music you all make, and happy writing.
Lynne
PS: Loved you and the whole cast in the "Twilight" series. I am a great-grandma baby boomer, and have been watching vampire/werewolf movies since the first ones came out in black and white. I really liked this series of movies the best. Thanks.
Posted at 2:10 on Dec 23, 2011
Love to hear more of your adventures, "Jackson and Betty against the world" or something cleverly written along the lines for a title.
Posted at 2:10 on Dec 23, 2011
Jackson, it was, and it is soooo good. And exciting.
Good written.
Will you and 100 Monkeys come back to Sweden? :)
Posted at 2:10 on Dec 23, 2011
This was writing at it’s best; I went through a wide range of emotions as I read; I fell in love, felt scared, angry, and relief. Many people can write a story but a very few can make their audience feel as though they where there or had some part in the story, you my friend are among that very few :)
Posted at 2:13 on Dec 23, 2011
J,you are really an amazing ARTIST!
Art is your craft, may it be music,photography,drawing or writing!
It's my first time to read an article that was written by you and I
Could say that you are good in story telling style of writing! :)
Keep those writing coming eh!
PS:I'm happy you have your Betty back! But next time be careful and
Don't get hurt! Ok!
Posted at 2:20 on Dec 23, 2011
love it!
i want more of you ♫ darlin' ♫♪
love + respect
we miss you
karin + jack
Posted at 2:33 on Dec 23, 2011
poor baby. i hope feel better soon.merry christmas and god bless.
Posted at 2:34 on Dec 23, 2011
Awwwww, i wish i was your guitar :)
I really loved reading that...it made me laugh...you should write more stuff, maybe like a tour diary...would Love to hear your thoughts about Europe esp. Germany !
Wishing you a merry christmas and a very happy New Year !
Love, Nadine
Oh, i have a Video of my 5 Year old singing a 100 Monkeys song..would Love to send it to you..its so funny as he doesnt speak english but tries :) where is it best to send to?
Posted at 2:36 on Dec 23, 2011
Very well written. I would love to read more stories of your adventures.
Posted at 2:36 on Dec 23, 2011
wow I find that to class. it is not a classical briefly history you has your own write style and makes it very interesting and singular. I would read gladly more from you.
jenny or @wurm85 with more twitter: -)
Posted at 2:39 on Dec 23, 2011
MI'm really gonna have to remember the explination of the exclamation: Hey! Haha Great story though. He has real talet when it comes to descriptive writing....among his other many talents.
Posted at 2:39 on Dec 23, 2011
That's great! Jackson you're a multi talented Person and I love you! You did great Keep writing! Love you
Posted at 2:39 on Dec 23, 2011
MI'm really gonna have to remember the explination of the exclamation: Hey! Haha Great story though. He has real talet when it comes to descriptive writing....among his other many talents.
Posted at 2:47 on Dec 23, 2011
Really enjoyed this. You really are awesome at everything, huh? I hope you continue to do this. Love hearing what you have to say :)
Posted at 2:48 on Dec 23, 2011
That's amazing! You are a talented writer, the love between a musician and his/her guitar in unbreakable. I'd love to read more.
Posted at 3:06 on Dec 23, 2011
Hey it sounds good, but I could do with out these two sentences: I could taste the salty San Franciscan air, polluted with sticky-sweet carbon dioxide, and my own fear. I could smell the bay, miles away, lapping against the shoreline like an excited Jack Russell terrier.
If you removed those, the part would get a much better flow.
Merry Christmas
Gitte
Posted at 3:13 on Dec 23, 2011
I love how expressive and descriptive this story is. I, like Jodie, knew the how the black eye was born, but I did not know it was fighting for your love, your beautiful Betty.
Great story. I would love for a series of stories, from each of the band members about memorable tour moments.
Posted at 3:13 on Dec 23, 2011
Love all the details and visuals. Nice job Jackson!
Posted at 3:13 on Dec 23, 2011
Love all the details and visuals. Nice job Jackson!
Posted at 3:16 on Dec 23, 2011
you are so talented!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [iam speechless] [:
Posted at 3:22 on Dec 23, 2011
And shouldn't you rather be loading the truck than unloading? You already had your instruments and gear out.
Sorry if I'm wrong, English is not my first language.
Posted at 3:22 on Dec 23, 2011
you are so talented!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [iam speechless] [:
Posted at 3:28 on Dec 23, 2011
Haha this is such a great story. So well written.
Posted at 3:28 on Dec 23, 2011
Haha this is such a great story. So well written.
Posted at 3:47 on Dec 23, 2011
Voy a ver si traducida lo pillo mejor. Desde luego eres ARTISTA. te gusta todo lo creativo. Me encanta! Saludos desde España.
Posted at 3:53 on Dec 23, 2011
Very interesting read about fighting for your true love. Loved it, thanks for sharing...I enjoyed the read immensely. Very talented man! xxx
Posted at 3:54 on Dec 23, 2011
OMG thats so sweet...Love It Jackson!!
I hope to see more...xD
Posted at 4:02 on Dec 23, 2011
Well well well, there is eloquence behind the Pretteh! I always thought you were special, but this short story brings it to a whole new level.
Well done, I especially enjoyed your description of the backdrop of San Francisco - you have a true knack of storytelling. Perhaps you will write more for us?
I loved the long, long sentences, filled with words that tickled my imagination, words that tickled all my senses - smell, vision, sound, and I was THERE in the alley, running beside you, feeling desperate for Betty.
Well done. Really well done. Don't stop doing this, it is evident that you like writing. And it is just as evident that you are good at it.
Happy holidays, and than you for sharing.
Anna
Posted at 4:08 on Dec 23, 2011
Great story! Made me laugh, ust like any good story should!! Very well written, please do more!
Posted at 4:10 on Dec 23, 2011
Jackson you're an excellent writer ... are a complete artist. Will you marry
me?
Posted at 4:19 on Dec 23, 2011
He sings, he plays music, he acts and he writes. I feel insignficant.
Having said that, his style of writing is very amooth and the reader can almost hear him speaking. Imagine being sat around a campfire! I had heard this story before through the grapevine, but hearing it from the horses mouth adds so
much more. And the testicle line.... Classic
Posted at 4:26 on Dec 23, 2011
Come on Jackson you can't just leave it there.... I want to keep reading, so unfair :o(
REALLY that snippet was good - you got me hooked, well done my lovely!!!!
Posted at 4:33 on Dec 23, 2011
Fantastic piece of writing Jackson, goes to show you are deeper than most hollywood actors which goes a long way!! Soglad it ended happily for you though.
Posted at 4:37 on Dec 23, 2011
Jackson, this was so well written. I think that there is nothing that you can't do. Glad that you and Betty have been reunited that day. I want another story from you Jay.
Posted at 4:37 on Dec 23, 2011
You are a good writer as well as singer/actor i am glad u got ur girl back plus the gibson les paul is the best ever x
Posted at 4:38 on Dec 23, 2011
I love this, Jackson! - and I would love to read more!
Merry xmas to you and your family.. And a happy new year! ;-)
Posted at 4:55 on Dec 23, 2011
All is well when it ends well
Posted at 5:02 on Dec 23, 2011
Like your writing style, it made an interesting reading. Best wishes
Posted at 5:04 on Dec 23, 2011
Great article! Thank you, Jackson! :) I wanna read more from Mr. Rathbone!
Posted at 5:11 on Dec 23, 2011
Very well written! Would love to read more. You travel a lot so I assume you have a lot to write about. And a lot of people would love to read it - so keep going!
Posted at 5:18 on Dec 23, 2011
That was a great story Jackson, my dad has one of those guitars and to be honest I'd say he has more affection for her than his 2 daughters ha ha. You did well getting it back without your vampire skills!
Posted at 5:24 on Dec 23, 2011
You're a multi-talented awesome man :)
I hope we could read another article by you :)
Posted at 5:26 on Dec 23, 2011
I think you are a great writer. It felt as if I was there watching it happen. I was impressed. Keep writing.
Posted at 5:28 on Dec 23, 2011
Now this is The kind of writng that draws me
In. I was right there with you and I could see
the fight and feel your passion. You're a
very talented writer indeed. Keep it up!
Posted at 5:30 on Dec 23, 2011
Awesome! Great piece jackson, a few messed up words, but over all awesome
Glad u got betty back.Didnt like u got a black eye. Lol
Posted at 5:30 on Dec 23, 2011
You definitely should write more, it's very well written. Very exciting but still soulfull - not a single boring sentence in the whole thing. Yep, I'd love to read more. Btw - glad you got her back ;)
Posted at 5:30 on Dec 23, 2011
This text is very pretty and captivating. I write myself, and I can see that my talent is not as talented as yours. Kisses from France
Posted at 5:38 on Dec 23, 2011
Dear Jackson, that story was wonderfully told. it brought a smile to my face. I wonder if you ever considered writing a book of some sort. I was left wondering what your other band members were doing while you where being brave.
Yours faithfully
Miss E Thorp
Posted at 5:40 on Dec 23, 2011
So well written I loved it! The beginning rally caught My internats and then I was stuck! Would love to read some more. Nice work!
Posted at 5:41 on Dec 23, 2011
Exciting story and very well written. Love the ending!
Posted at 5:51 on Dec 23, 2011
absolutely loved this - especially the part
Get your ass back here before I cut off your sticky fingers and shove them so deeply into every known orifice that your parents will reel back and choose to never consummate that moment of lust years ago when you were merely a swimming little spunk in your father's left testicle!"
it made really laugh out loud - awesome.
Posted at 5:57 on Dec 23, 2011
I love how this is written is like a full blown novel in just a few paragraphs. I really like how adventurous you are with your choice of words and phrases. I would definitely read something of yours again, it is as captivating as your lyrics.
Well Done.
Posted at 6:10 on Dec 23, 2011
Jackson this is amazing!! You should definately write more, with this kind of talent you should write a book. I'd definately read it :)
Keep writing!!
Posted at 6:32 on Dec 23, 2011
But I thought you knew martial arts? The last paragraph describing the fight needs a little pruning but this is interesting.
Posted at 6:47 on Dec 23, 2011
Pretty well written. However, the third paragraph where you talk about being in San Francisco could be reworked. I think simply saying you had a day off but instead chose to work would be sufficient. The parts about the Gap and the song you were writing seemed more like you were trying to fit the information in to the story. It didn't really do anything to move your narrative forward.
That said, I found it to be an interesting story which made me hope for a happy ending.
Posted at 6:47 on Dec 23, 2011
brilliant, very discriptive, engaging reader from start.look forward to reading more xx
Posted at 6:57 on Dec 23, 2011
Hello.
For a first time writer you were really very good. Got a bit too detailed in the middle though.. it sort of broke the flow. Loved the opening line and found the 'singular exclamation' hilarious.
p.s. Do you mind leaving a comment on my blog? I'm having a really bad day. (Honest)
Posted at 6:58 on Dec 23, 2011
Your writing just adapts to its own surroundings. The language is the same. You got me drawn in and then I had time for a little snicker-snort too, as I usually do when you show your true self.. Very excellent job.
Posted at 7:00 on Dec 23, 2011
Aha...
I think I read this article 3 times on your official web-page. I didn´t really understand all of it. I mean I understood the words but not the meaning. I guess my interpretation was wrong because of that.
Betty.... is an instrument, a guitar? I thought it was your girlfriend. I mean because of "Betty", O_o but the article is very well written. Of course you write awesome articles, you are a multi-talented genius. And very good with words... I hope you were alright? Poor Jay, your face... *hug* You write more like a hero: "My hands bit into concrete to cushion my fall" that´s very exciting^^ was it really that way? Haha...
and very funny as well, a very long line:"You son of a ****! That's my guitar! (...)" lol I can imagine that well hahahah.....!! XDDD Especially your facial expression xD no, what I want to say is:
100 stars for 100 Monkeys hero Jackson Rathbone. *smile*
(I couldn´t watch "Aim High" 5 & 6 episode, because it´s only on the official web-page and Europeans cannot watch these videos... I couldn´t find another source either. Could someone please upload the "Aim High" 5 & 6 episode on another web-page which would be international, many fans come from Europe as well. Please, please.)
Posted at 7:07 on Dec 23, 2011
Great writing!
Posted at 7:16 on Dec 23, 2011
that"s a great article on your feelings ..i love it sounds like a song while reading it ..it's so well written hope you will do other ones
Posted at 7:16 on Dec 23, 2011
A tale of caution and woe. Left with a message to always keep your best love in sight. Very interesting read and kept me on the edge. So glad you were able to save Betty and that she was safe.
Posted at 7:19 on Dec 23, 2011
I LOVED IT, i just couldn't stop reading,was very sad to find myself on the last page,glad it has a happy ending though. Your style of writing is amazing because it paints pictures in the reader's imagenation. You are multitaleted! I wish to read more.
Posted at 7:47 on Dec 23, 2011
Really good written. Love that story! Great that he'd do anything for his love!!!
Posted at 7:48 on Dec 23, 2011
Great piece, and I am a BIG fan of you
XXXX C
Posted at 7:53 on Dec 23, 2011
As a fellow writer I found this to be amazing. This was well written on so many different levels (to to mention hysterical). The imagery was vivid I felt like I lived through it too. THIS is the kind of writing people love to read! THIS is the kind of writing that takes talent to compose! Keep up the good work Jackson!!
Posted at 7:53 on Dec 23, 2011
You're unbelievably talented, a great actor, musician and a writer as well. I enjoyed reading this so much and I look forward to reading more of what you write in the future.
Posted at 8:02 on Dec 23, 2011
Loved it, it was just great so hope he writes more...Go Jackson!! The wrighting was well done.
Posted at 8:07 on Dec 23, 2011
Jackson, you are one of the most talented people to be currently walking this earth. You are such a fresh breath of air to take in.
This was a great story to read, hope to see many more self written articles in the future.
Posted at 8:07 on Dec 23, 2011
I really liked the article, but I feel as though it ended to abruptly. The first five paragraphs are so detailed. As if you were telling the story in person. But the last paragraph felt rushed, like you had run out of time. Your style of writing paints such a vivid picture, And that is a oddity among the majority of writers today. You might have just stumbled upon your true talent!
Posted at 8:15 on Dec 23, 2011
Jackson you are a really talented writer and an all around amazing artist.
Loved reading it.
Thank you for sharing!
Posted at 8:20 on Dec 23, 2011
It is very well written, intresting and it makes me want to read more.
The articles in our german newspaper are nothing compared to THIS!
Posted at 8:24 on Dec 23, 2011
Very exciting to read, this is great Jackson, love it!
Posted at 8:40 on Dec 23, 2011
LOVE your description of Hey!! One word can convey so much, even a little word :) You are a true wordsmith never have I read a story about a near-miss mugging sound so romantic!(the song Glory of Love by Peter Cetera sprins to mind) A knight in shing armor for gutairs across the globe! We need to get you a bat signal Gutair Man ;) But in saying that i'm very relived that would-be mugger only had his fists and not anything else (you hear such horror stories these days!) Glad this story had a happy ending, It has been my pleasure to read about it. I've said it before I'll say it again....... A True Wordsmith, Don't ever stop writing :)
Lots Of Love @JoesWelshBunny xoxo
Posted at 8:51 on Dec 23, 2011
Nicely written article, thoroughly enjoyed it. I think perhaps the title of the piece was a touch misleading. Whoever wrote the introductory section immediately underneath the photograph needs a slap for being illiterate. The piece felt very much like an article that was supposed to be part of a larger series rather than a stand-alone piece- which I rather hope is the case as I'd definitely be interested in reading further.
Posted at 8:52 on Dec 23, 2011
I love the fact that you are so protective of the things you love. Your writing style is pretty expressive and all those details made me actually feel your panic and fear when the shadow stole Betty. Write more! Thank you
Posted at 8:53 on Dec 23, 2011
Jackson,
I love this! I am so happy you fought for your love and got to be the hero in the end! You are a really talented writer and I would love to read more about your adventures :)
Posted at 9:04 on Dec 23, 2011
Amazing! Incredibly well written!
Posted at 9:04 on Dec 23, 2011
Besides making remarkable roles on TV, sings and has the gift of writing and transmits sensations. You're passionate.
Posted at 9:06 on Dec 23, 2011
This is so funny! Keep up the writing!
Posted at 9:10 on Dec 23, 2011
You should write a book, I would definitly buy it!
Posted at 1:10 on Dec 23, 2011
It's amazing written, what a feeling! It's hard not to identify with the situation, if it had been my dearest guitar (Lola). You know where all the little nicks and scratches are from and you have a history together.
I look forward to read a story from the European tour and maybe even some memory from Sweden? Wish you and all the loved ones a Merry Christmas.
Posted at 12:15 on Jan 02, 2012
Would like to read more, for sure! Always a pleasure for you to expand on interesting tales of travel and leisure.
Posted at 12:43 on Jan 02, 2012
NEVER get between a man and his love !!! That punk's lucky he only got off with a few scuff marks.... Betty's good though? Probably purred even sweeter that night back in your arms, right?? Keep the music flowing you two lovebirds. Love your music. --Tee
Posted at 11:13 on Jan 05, 2012
I play the guitar and I know the feeling, I think that Betty is how he speaks and lives so to save Betty would be second nature as I would do the same!
Posted at 2:34 on Jan 29, 2012
Absolutely brilliant. Totally grabbed my attention. You've got quite a story-telling talent, and I'd love to read more of these.
But looking at those pics... Owwiee.
Guess Betty was worth it. ;)
xx
Posted at 8:32 on Jan 30, 2012
Very well written. Your certainly are full of special gifts. Keep sharing them with us!
Posted at 11:53 on Feb 06, 2012
Jackson I love Your stories! I sure want to read more!
Posted at 4:49 on Feb 07, 2012
There's seriously a GAP at Haight and Ashbury, now? D:
Love your writing style. Quite epic.
I want to read more by you, keep up the good work. :]
Googling 100 Monkeys... now. :P
If your song writing is anything like your storytelling, I know I'm in for a treat.
You're lucky enough to know true love, I'm glad you and Betty were reunited. Even though it came to fisty cuffs--but a man ought to fight for the one he loves, am I right?
I apologize for my use of emoticons...
Posted at 1:45 on Feb 08, 2012
I would Love to read more! Very entertaining. I just love everything about u. By the way,a random thing comes to mind...did u know that you have the same birthday as Nostradamus? :)
Posted at 7:09 on Feb 10, 2012
hello Jackson,it`s a good written article,while l read it could feel the enthusiasm and devotion to the music and the writing itself.And it`s funny enough to keep the interest of the reader...I am glad that the end was happy for both of you...keep going,wish you all the best
greetings from Croatia
Posted at 2:04 on Feb 13, 2012
Its very good short and to the point, but with enough detail to make the reader feel like they are really there watching it all play out. Its serious and deep with some humor mixed in there. All in all keep writing!
Posted at 1:10 on Feb 14, 2012
You are such a talented writer. You certainly have a way of describing events. Love it!